I saw her and then she was gone, I heard her whispering for me to follow. It only took a few seconds for me to decide...
As I follow the cold, wet stream the mist lays at my feet like a blanket. I see the stream reflecting the trees and flowers when... I hear movements splashing the the stream and a voice echoing "follow me!"
Elz I reckon this is really good:)
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Hi Ella
ReplyDeleteThat was really good, I was looking at Maya's writing two just before and yours is just as awesome at hers. Good similes and adjectives. I am very proud of you!!